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***CLICK ON NOVEMBER 2005 IN THE ARCHIVES- YOU CAN READ ALL THE CHAPTERS IN ORDER ON ONE PAGE.*** *This is my novel. It's a romance novel set in Kauai. Hope you enjoy it. If you'd like to share your comments, please leave a comment on the post you're referencing.

Monday, November 07, 2005

Chapter 9

Chapter 9 (10pm)

Annie pressed her mouth up to Stone’s. She danced her tongue across his soft lips once more before he yielded to her. Heat exploded through her as she tasted him. Her tongue danced with his as his hands came up to caress her behind. He wrapped his arms around her, and just when he would have tightened his grasp, she stepped back away from him.

She looked out at him with bedroom eyes and a devilish grin as she continued to walk backwards. She slipped her feet out of her shoes and pulled her t-shirt free of her shorts. Luke’s back was glued to the door behind him.

AJ stepped on the toe of one sock and pulled her foot out. Then she did the same thing with the other foot and sock. She was stripping for him? Even taking off her socks like that turned him on.

His jaw dropped as he watched her slowly strip off her t-shirt, then her shorts. She stood there in her swimsuit and lowered the straps off her shoulders. “I’m almost ready to go shower.” AJ wiggled the suit past her slender waist and curvy hips. “Are you coming?” she purred.

Her swimsuit puddled on the floor around her ankles. By the time she reached around and started to unto her braid, Luke was rock hard and still fully dressed. If he didn’t hurry up, he would be coming. He kicked off his shoes while he pulled his shirt over his head. He quickly undid his shorts and shoved them down his legs, taking his socks off at the same time. With hungry eyes, he followed her into the bathroom.

Boy, she was full of surprises! He found AJ with an open travel bag on the counter, holding a strip of six condoms. She was just about to tear one off when he heard himself ask, “Why do you have so many?”

She looked up at him in the mirror.

“I mean, I thought said you were here alone?” he nervously tried to amend his question.

“Girl scout motto – be prepared,” she answered with a smirk and tucked the foil packet in her fist. “Just because I came to Kauai alone doesn’t mean I shouldn’t be ready in every way.”

She stepped over to the oversized shower and turned the spray on ‘hot’ until the water started to steam the glass shower doors. “You can’t come alone to someplace as romantic as Kauai and believe you’ll be alone the whole time.” She reached in and adjusted the water temperature before she stepped in to the shower. She beckoned him in with a crook of her finger. “I didn’t set out to find someone,” she said as he joined her, “but I’m glad I did.”

Stone closed the shower doors behind him and with his kiss, showed her just how glad he was too.

AJ tore open the foil packet and cupped her hand on his chest. She slid down his body until she knelt before him, her hand trailing from his chest to his thigh. She sheathed the full length of his erection as she, admiring his raw male form with a hunger in her eyes. She rose slowly, rubbing her breasts against him the whole way up as she came to stand before him. “It looks like you’re quite prepared as well.”

Luke’s mouth lowered to hers and he plunged his tongue inside when she parted her lips. His hands freely explored her curves, while she returned the favor in kind. He started at her shoulders, moved quickly down her arms, then slowed to appreciate the way her breast filled his palm. He lowered his head and took her nipple into his mouth, as his hand explored the soft underside of her other breast.

Annie moaned with pleasure as Stone lapped at her puckered nipple, then squirmed with delight when he bit down gently. Her own hands followed his ribs to his narrow waist, then rounded behind him to grab a handful of his ass. That finely chiseled ass, she thought. She no longer had to wonder if it felt as awesome as it looked – she felt the proof under her fingers.

Luke’s lips reluctantly left her breasts and they trailed down to her navel, where he dipped his tongue. She gave a surprised chuckle, but threw her head back in anticipation of where he was headed. He would not disappoint.

Her hands slipped from his body as Luke knelt before her in the shower and kissed a trail across the soft hollow around her navel. His hands had cupped her behind and they softly kneaded her roundness. He continued to rain kisses across her belly, and she gasped with delight when he strayed lower and placed a quick kiss right on her clitoris.

Annie’s hands moved from where they hung limply at her sides to rest on his broad shoulders. She squeezed him there when he returned to kissing her belly. He was going in the opposite direction of where she wanted, and she wanted to let him know. Her breath caught in her throat as she felt a single finger slide around her hip. He let his finger follow a path of water sluicing down her body, until he reached her wet curls.

Luke felt her shudder as he slowly let his finger circle round her clitoris twice. He looked up to watch her face, her eyes closed as she teetered on the brink of orgasm. She moaned and the grip on his shoulders tightened as he traced her lips from front to back. When he stopped moving his finger, her eyes flew open. Their eyes met, hunger and desire mirrored in both.

Luke watched AJ's tongue flick out over her lips. When she sucked in her lower lip, he pushed his finger up and entered her silken heat. The throaty sound she made sounded like “More!” but he couldn’t be sure. He slowly withdrew his finger and slipped it in again.

Annie opened her eyes and looked down at Stone. She’d never come in three strokes before, but it certainly seemed like today would be the first time. She clenched her thighs together but he still wiggled his finger in her.

“I want you,” she purred breathlessly.

“You’ve got me.” His eyes twinkled.

“In me. Now. Please.” Annie was this close to release, but she wanted to hold out for more. She wanted her orgasm with him inside her. She wanted to feel his length fill her first.

She reached down and gently led him to stand beside her. Luke let his pulsing erection slip between them and he pressed it into her navel. With a grin, he turned the showerhead away from them slightly, so the spray hit the wall instead of their faces. Then he pulled her to him and pressed a kiss to her neck.

“I want you to wrap your legs around me and hold on. You’re about to make my shower fantasy come true.” The wicked words had her panting hard and she nodded. She put her arms on his shoulders and he held her hips. With a boost, AJ wrapped her long, slim legs around his narrow waist. He rained more kisses across her neck as she leaned her head back.

He held her and turned slightly in the shower, pressing her back up against the wall. The tile behind her hadn’t been warmed by the spray and she gasped as she felt the coolness from her shoulders to her bottom. With a gasp, she felt his fingers find her clitoris again, and she realized his hands were no longer supporting her.

She looked into his hungry eyes and asked, “You have a shower fantasy? Tell me.”

Luke let a lazy smile come to his lips as he guided his swollen head to her wet entrance. “I’ve always wanted to do it in the shower, with a woman’s long legs wrapped around me. No one’s ever obliged me before.”

Annie felt him nudge the tip of his cock into her, but he pushed no further than that. She wriggled and tried to bounce a little, to get him to thrust himself fully into her. She wanted to feel his fullness, and he was teasing her with this little taste of him.

“Patience, my sweet AJ.” The devil’s own grin broke on his face. “Have patience, and we can both enjoy this. Right now, if you move anymore, I’m going to cum before it even starts. You’ve got me so built up, I want to explode now.” He leaned in and kissed the tip of her nose.

Stone looked like he was telling the truth, and she certainly didn’t want things to end before they’d even really begun. Annie stilled in his arms, and pressed a kiss to his lips.

“Take as long as you like… to make it last,” she purred.

Luke couldn’t wait any longer to bury himself inside her silkiness and he thrust himself into her, closing his eyes as they both moaned with delight. He could feel her tighten around his cock, and he shuddered slightly.

“Don’t do that too much more, I’m warning you…” he growled.

“Sorry,” she cooed. “You’ve got me on the brink of an orgasm and I’m starting to get impatient.” She looked up at him with her mermaid green eyes.

He licked the hollow of her neck. “Don’t you worry – you’ll get yours. As many times as you want it. Just slow down for a second.”

Annie looked into his eyes and knew that he’d give her as many orgasms as she could stand to have. She unclenched her love muscles and she felt his cock quiver inside her.

“Thank you,” he whispered against her neck, as he slowly pulled back a bit then thrust in again. Stone’s tongue danced around her earlobe and he took a little nibble.

“Stone,” she beckoned. When he looked at her with smoldering eyes, she continued. “I want three.” She smiled at him, where a surprised look spread on his face. “At least three. So take your time, but let’s finish in the shower before the hot water runs out.”

The lusty desire in her eyes sent Luke over the edge. He held her bottom as he rocked his own hips back and forth, slowly pulling of her, and then slowly thrusting back in. The rhythm was slow and tantalizing for a few minutes. Their kisses started slowly too, but shortly their tongues were dancing together faster, with more passion.

His thrusts quickened to match pace with their kisses. Harder, faster. She felt his length growing inside her and knew he would shortly cum. If he kept this pace up, she would reach her peak as well. The question was, would she reach hers before he reached his?

Annie didn’t have to worry about that. Not when Stone released one hand and put it between them. His finger quickly found her clitoris and a dozen strokes and circles later, Annie exploded. She saw stars before her as her muslces quivered.

Her throaty growl pushed Luke to his limit. He came with an intensity he hadn’t experienced before. Must be because this was a fantasy come true… I love the way her legs wrap around me, he thought as he pulsed inside her, his throbbing sending off another wave of aftershocks for her.

Their panting slowed and they opened their eyes. “Wow,” he said simply.

“Agreed. Wow.” Annie cleared her throat. “Help me down now? I’m not sure if my legs will support me,” she said with a slight chuckle.

Luke held her hips as she slipped her long legs from his waist and then stood once more before him. He cupped her chin and tenderly kissed her lips.

“Thanks. For making my fantasy come true.” He deepened his kiss, and tickled the roof of her mouth with his tongue.

“Maybe next time we can fill one of your fantasies,” he said as he discreetly removed the condom and placed it in the corner by the doors. He’d get it on his way out. “You got any fantasies that have to do with doing it on the beach, by chance?” Luke asked innocently, but with an evil twinkle in his eye.

“Can’t think of one right now. But I know I could think of one, if properly persuaded.” She turned and picked up the mesh scrubbie and body wash she’d put in the shower earlier this morning. “I tend to think better when I’m clean. Wash my back?” She handed him the soapy scrubbie, frothing with bubbles smelling of citrus and berries.

He took it from her hands and, with his hand on her shoulder, turned her back to him. He used gentle circular strokes to wash her back. He knelt beside her again, and slowly pulled a trail of bubbles across her hip and down her leg. Her body was beautiful – her legs were long and strong. Her hips curvy, her behind rounded and full. Above them, her waist narrow and slender, with a gentle hollow in her belly at her navel.

He was a leg man. Not that he didn’t appreciate a woman’s breasts – he did. He had really appreciated AJ’s breasts in the shower. But he was a sucker for a gorgeous set of gams. Slender and strong, a mile or so long. And that's what this willowy vixen had. He gently washed his favorite spot – that delicate area where the thigh meets the butt. He just loved the way the bottom of a woman’s butt cheek peeked out from her swimsuit or panties. To him, that was more of a turn on than if she’d worn a thong that revealed her entire backside. And what a backside it was…

Annie looked over her shoulder and saw the goofy grin spread across Stone’s face. She cleared her throat to get his attention.

“Sorry. Guess you were extra dirty back there. Did you fall on the trail or something?” he grinned up at her. Luke danced the scrubbie up the front of her legs, stopping briefly to dip into her navel. He drew lazy circles of bubbles around her breasts and up her neck. Then he pulled her into his arms and shimmied up against her.

With a giggle, she asked in wonder, “What are you doing now?”

“I’m washing myself. With you. See?” He leaned back slightly, so that when they looked down at their bodies, his entire front had gotten all soapy from the bubbles that had covered her. “See? All clean.” He looked up at AJ to find her with a disapproving look on her face.

“That’s not how you wash, and you know it.” She took the scrubbie from his hands, rinsed it momentarily under the water, then added more body wash. She rubbed it between her palms and again it grew all sudsy.

“If you aren’t going to wash yourself, then you’d better let me do it.” She rubbed the scrubbie in a figure eight on his chest, around his nipples. He chuckled as he watched her watching him. If she kept this up, he’d be ready for round two by the time she got to his male parts.

Annie pushed one arm up and Stone held it over his head. She soaped him up, from fingers to elbow to arm pit to shoulder. He lowered his arm and she chased bubbles across his collarbone, raising his other arm when she reached the other side. She repeated the performance, then spun him around to face away from her. He slapped his hands up on the tile wall and his head dipped down as he rolled it from side to side. She made quick work of covering his back with swirls of soap, then she knelt behind him.

Luke heard the scrubbie plop to the floor and he heard her open the cap to her bottle of body wash again. Looks like she needs more soap, he thought as he closed his eyes and leaned his forehead against the tile.

When AJ returned to the task of washing him, what he felt wasn’t the scrubbie he'd expected. Instead, he felt AJ’s warm hands, slick with body wash. He let out a guttural groan. “You’re killing me here, AJ.”

With a light touch, she ran her hands in kneading circles on his ass. She loved to touch that ass – it just felt so… so right beneath her fingers. She slowly moved to his legs, pressing her thumgs slightly as she ran her hands down the backs of his thighs. When she moved to his calves, she could feel his muscles releasing the tension. She smiled happily – after holding her up for their passionate fantasy session, he deserved a little massaging.

Annie put her hands on Stone’s hips and swiveled him to face her. When he turned, he saw her eyes level with his navel. He held his hand out and cupped her chin. “What are you doing?” he asked quietly.

“Just making sure you’re clean, every inch of you.” With that said, she cupped her hands around his balls and rolled them gently from hand to hand. He groaned and sucked in a sharp breath.

“Hmmm. Looks like I missed quite a few inches over here.” He looked down at her devilish grin, her vixen green eyes twinkling up at him. He let his eyes close as his head rolled back slightly on his broad shoulders.

Annie wet one hand in the water spray while with the other, she threaded her fingers into the curls at the base of his penis. He groaned again, and this time, his erection pulsed beneath her fingers as it grew.

She curled her hands around his shaft and began to stroke it gently. The soap foamed as she rubbed him, the number of bubbles increasing as she quickened her rhythm.

His hand darted out to still hers, and he looked down at her with desire in his eyes. He pulled her to stand next to him under the spray of water.

“I think it’s best if we rinse off now,” he said huskily. “You can’t know how much I want you right now,” he swallowed, “but I wouldn’t last till the end if we did it standing up a second time.”

“No,” Annie agreed. “I think you’ve abused your legs enough for one day. We can try out the bed, if we want to go a second round.” Annie knew she’d definitely want another round with Stone.

“Yes, we can. Besides, I believe I still owe you two.”

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